Wednesday, 7 September 2016

Writing portfolio post

Description: this term we were put in writing groups we had elly,nic,and troy then we made a story from a video showing us how to make a tenis ball then we made a story about the tenis balls. we were not alouded to tell the readers that we were making a tenis ball... what opps i just told you. ok well you can read the story

Feedback:I like your story about how a customer gave you an idea.Next time you should write a longer description.

1 comment:

  1. Edward you may need to change the size in your embed code to make it easier to read next time. This story is the same as Angus' Did you write it together?